Yah Grizz, that artwork looks pretty cool. I know what you mean with how the blue looks a little unfinished (as if it was traced but never completed by the Williams artists). I had to double check with the ipdb photos / flyers after seeing yours as I thought maybe that was just the
VP version but the reall PF is just the same with that half finished look.
I think it looks a little bettter though with some lighting changes to mix up the monotone element and with my
MOD things are a little darker anyway when at least the lights go off so it might not matter as much.
Cheers to your MODed PF and I guess that's why you call it a
MOD vs. a redraw as you're adding-on and taking over from where the Williams artists put down their paint brushes - too bad they weren't still in busines and hiring

If the layout / dimensions are the same as the original, I might be able to retrofit the GI8 Light
MOD to it without too much re-work so maybe could offer both versions when the time comes.