This is interesting. I don't think you are ever going to be able to get it perfect for everyone because of different cabinet builds and different height people (or even different stances, like you said). It's a bit like that 3D sidewalk art that only looks correct from one position (see #15 and #23 here). That said, it's remarkably good already and I really appreciate the attention to detail for cabinets.
Here's the image on my cabinet - a standard 37" VirtuaPin, which Paul says is the same dimensions as a Fish Tales.
Eyeball view - I'm 6'0" and I tried to have the lens where my eyes would be when playing normally (leaning over the table slightly).
Full table view - This shows the whole table down to the lockdown bar.
If I'm going to nitpick, I agree with others that the flasher in the back looks a little weird. It's tough to see in the picture, but it's like I'm seeing too direct a view of the front side considering how high my eyes are. If I crouch down about a foot, it seems better. It then looks about like what my brain is expecting from that height. I think peoples' eyes are drawn to this flasher because we know what a cylinder like that should look like from certain angles. By comparison, I couldn't really tell you if I'm seeing too much of one side or the other on most of the other objects near the back of the playfield, though. So it all looks fine.
The problem with the apron is illustrated by the second pic. 16:9 monitors are really nice for cabinets, but still not quite as tall as a playfield it seems. I don't own a real machine for direct comparison, but if you look at the second pic I think the part of the apron with the instructions cards would be on the blacked out part with the VirtuaPin logo, not up on the screen. You wouldn't have that gap there pushing the flippers away from you (example real table for comparison). Now I think many of us have gotten used to seeing that part on-screen, as every pinball game I can think of shows it. It is cool having the full apron with art and instructions cards for each table, after all.
So I don't think it's a huge deal one way or the other. But if you're going for the most realistic viewing angle (like from your eyes to the flippers, for example), a view with the cards cut off may work better. It does seem like maybe your render is assuming that the monitor is right up against the lockdown bar - the view of the flippers is almost completely vertical, with only a touch of the front side showing.
Obviously your mileage will vary if your cab is different!